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Review #4665700
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The Confused Turkey Open in new Window. [E]
Cildren's poem
by green is happy Author Icon
Review by KingsSideCastle Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
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This was a fun one. It definitely fits well with a Thanksgiving theme. I definitely recommend sharing this in November. I enjoyed reading this. The couplet rhyming pattern worked well and the rhythm was very smooth. The plot of this poem made me smile as the turkey did his best to avoid the typical Thanksgiving outcome but seemed to fail at every turn. I cringed a little bit at the farmer approached the turkey holding the ax and then burst into laughter as the twist was revealed. It was a great ending and a Perfect Poem! *Turkey*

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