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 Dark Start 2 Open in new Window. [E]
continuation of the story about Gabriel
by Mikey Author Icon
Review of Dark Start 2  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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There are a lot of minor grammar errors and typos. One sentence that caught me as particularly wrong was. "I feel guilty beeing the guy that make her so sad." it should be "being" and "made". There are a lot more minor things like this scattered throughout the piece. I would recommend running it through Grammarly because it usually picks things like those up for me. It is the more egregious stuff that it misses and that I don't know about that people correct me on. It is worth the time to add Grammarly to your browser though.

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