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 Branding of a Heretic (Nihilian Effect) Open in new Window. [E]
A historian discovers a truth that could shake the world.
by Kal S. Davian Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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The link at the end is no longer valid. I would have liked to read more but... The story is wonderful. The main character is clearly a very focused researcher. I wonder about the world this takes place in, and about the races involved. Wings on the main character? I can see her getting ink all over her face and clothing. I can imagine the servants getting upset over the stains. Maybe she should just break out and reinvent tie-dyeing. Then the splotches of ink wouldn't look so strange. Or put random splotches all over her clothes in a pattern...

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