This is a good poem. It definitely leave the reader with an ominous feeling. The description helped me find a little bit of the context of this. It suggest that an unpleasant experience in the past that continues to haunt the narrator. There is a great dark feel to this. Rhythmically this poem flows really nicely. The are no exact rhymes there are words that sound similar particularly at the end of each stanza (lingers, slithers, whispers). The syllable count for this poem was spot on making it very easy to read though There are also a nice set of refrains in this as well as phrases are repeated. Excellent writing!

This review was done for: "Ultimate Trinket Adventure [Mainland]" 

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