This was a very exciting mystery short story. You did a great job with the characters. It was easy to follow and sympathize with the lead character. As a reader I was hoping she would be able to solve her fathers murder. It was thrilling to read her story and follow along with her as she investigated the mystery. I liked the clue used that allowed her to move the investigation along. It made sense that the daughter was able to identify her father's handwriting. The twist was pulled off really well and I did not see it coming. It was quite a shock and intense finish. Great writing!!

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