I like the summary of this poem "Goes in an unexpected direction". It definitely is a nice way to capture what this poem is about. I was reminded of "Paradise Lost" when I was reading this which also has a fallen angel though I am unable to tell from reading this whether it is the same one or an Angel in a similar situation. You do an excellent job of depicting the mindset of the character in this poem allowing readers to visualize and if not agree with the character's perspective, at least sympathize with it. The first stanza is also an amazing hook which pulls in the reader almost instantly with not only the sudden fall but the fact that the angel gets up and laughs. It just made the reader want to read the rest of this. Great Writing!!

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