First off. Great use of the cover image. It helped me to visualize what this poem was about with that single image. I also love the name of this poem. This poem is light and carefree. It cause the reader to picture looking up at the sky and imagining what shapes the clouds take on. There are a lot of fun ones depicted: donuts, towers, castles, rabbit. It is setup to flow nicely with some good rhymes used. I think my favorite phrase in this was "Soft as a Lullaby". It just sounds really sweet. Good writing! This item was reviewed for "Ultimate Trinket Adventure [Mainland]" My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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