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Hallo!
This poem showed up on 'Read and Review'.

What a lovely, profound theme told in a few well chosen, simple words. Beautiful! The rhyme scheme and verse work for the story you tell and message you convey.

Just a few small suggestions:
1. In the brief description, you have all capitals except the word 'Friday'. Maybe you'd like to standardise that.
2. Maybe you'd like to put 'spiritual' as your first genre, and pick two more, to give the poem more exposure on site.
3. There's some WritingML on top of the poem that you may want to look at.
4. I'm not sure if it's to do with the WritngML, but I think you could reduce the line spacing a bit, if you like.

Thanks for sharing this one!

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