My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

THE FOLDER

The Folder contains a variety of nature poems.

WHAT I LIKED

I enjoyed all the poems I read. They were easy to read and enjoy.

ENGAGING

I liked the conversational style and rythmes of the poem.

VARIETY

I read a poem about the sun, winter, a flower and autumn. I enjoyed how one poem played with words, and how one tapped into the sense of touch. One poem evoked emotion, while another evoked a heartwarming visual for me.

MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML.

PARTING THOUGHTS

I might suggest using a graphic in the introduction to set the tone/mood for the folder, if doable. The folder stays consistent with the types of items within it.

Reviewed by StephB


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