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Warmth Of The Sun. Open in new Window. [E]
A short poem about our Sun.
by The Crossing .. Author Icon
Review by StephBee Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE POEM

The sun is a busy force of nature.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I liked the verse regarding night and repeat, bringing the cycle of the sun full circle.

*Star* STRUCTURE

There are 2 stanza with 4 lines and and a AABB rythme scheme.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling, punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to make the font bigger and easier to read.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

I have no suggestions for improvement. The poem implies the busyness of the sun, providing warmth and food to the birds, invigorating all.

Reviewed by StephB
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