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Winter. Open in new Window. [E]
A contest entry, must have the word "tarnish" and be 24 syllables.
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Review by StephBee Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE POEM

A poem about the beauty of winter.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I liked the word play of the poem, using the word "beautiful" in the first lines makes the words "frost" and "stars" (implying cold) glitter in beauty.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a contest entry which requires the poem to be 24 syllables and use the word tarnish.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling, punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to make the font bigger and easier to read.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

I have no suggestions for improvement. The poem is easy to read and is cold, evoking a shiver, with a focus on the sensation of touch.

Reviewed by StephB
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