My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

THE POEM

A poem about the life of a flower.

WHAT I LIKED

I liked the last stanza. For me, it summed up the emotional simplicity of just being a flower.

STRUCTURE

Each stanza rythmes and there are two lines in each stanza, (couplet) except the last stanza which does not rythme.

MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling, punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to make the font bigger and easier to read.

PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

I have no suggestions for improvement. The poem is easy to read, understand, and quietly poignant.




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .