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 Death Open in new Window. [13+]
A poem about death
by J.Gove Author Icon
Review of Death  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hallo!
I came across this poem on Random Reads.
The title, brief description and genres work for the poem. The verse structure and words chosen put your message through clearly. The poem is a smooth read from start to finish.

In terms of layout, would you like to consider centering the poem, and trying out different fonts, sizes and line-spacing options?

The message of your poem seems to be that there is beauty in peace and in accepting that finally, we are more similar than different. The end is the same for everyone. This message comes through.

Perhaps, having seen the beauty in death, you'd try to see life as being beautiful as well? A life well lived is a lovely thing, to be appreciated and celebrated. The human body (any living being) is a miracle of the physical, the intellectual, the emotional and so many other aspects. Maybe it's this complexity that finally needs to cease, but it needs to exist first.

Well - your poem certainly made me think! Thank you for sharing it!
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