Wow, a tight plot, and good characterization in a very small package. I admire this kind of writing it is what I shoot for. I did a 100 word story challenge to get better at it and I'm pretty sure you would excel if Lilli ever does it again. I can't remember if you were in it or not. Had my head up my own butt at the time. I love the vengeance motive of the woman.

I love that Nik was such an efficient receptionist. He did his job and then some. I don't know about West though I wasn't really rooting for him since he was a pretty unsympathetic character after what he did to Rachel.