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 Toys for Poor Kids Open in new Window. [E]
A poem written for that cheery, Christmas-y feeling.
by pierce95 Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Ouch! That is quite the passive-aggressive poem. As one of the poor kids that got donated toys I have to say that at least a little attempt on their part meant a lot to me never mind that they could have done so much more.

The thing of it is to criticize this behavior only during the holiday season misses entirely the fact that suffering exists all year long. People go hungry, birthdays happen with no presents or cake. Grandpa sits in the home, alone with no one that actually cares for him caring for him.

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