Good evening! I thought I would come on by and have a short little visit with you and I came across your piece that you call "Chapter 1 Heskah POV". And as I came on in I found an interesting, unique, a one of a kind, clever piece. You really do have a way with words as you paint a picture so well for me to clearly see. I do hope that there is more to this chapter One as you sure did leave me wanting even more! I did not see any errors. I really like this and you drew me in and then left me hanging. So what at the end of your piece you ended with. I'm smaller than the pureblood khanta. Father has sent me pictures of animals from earth. Based on those pictures I can say I look less eel-like then the rest of my kind.
So what does he look like? these are things I need to know! Keep sharing and most of all keep writing!




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