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Our Journey’s End... Open in new Window. [E]
Death - Oh how we’ve wondered of the place we’ll all end up – without a trace...
by Robin:TheRhymeMaven Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Good evening! I thought I would just come on by for a little short visit and as I did I came across your creative, unique, and clever poem you call "Our Journey's End." And I also like your description and they both drew me in. I loved the way it made me feel as you paint a very clear picture for me to see as you spin your web of words ever drawing me in. I absolutely love this poem from the very beginning to the very end and I love how it all fits together as well. I would have to say that the last two paragraphs of your poem are my most favorite not to take away any other part of your poem and how fitting for you to end with "His Amazing Grace!"
Keep sharing and most of all keep writing!

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