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 It's Classified Open in new Window. [E]
Hand it Over
by QueenNormaJean maybesnow?! Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Good afternoon! I thoght I would come on by for a short little visit as I did I came about this piece that you call "It's Classified".

I will have to say that I was drawn in by your title and also your description ~ "Hand It Over". And as I begin to read your short story you had me from the start as you weave your webs ever so cleverly, uniquely and so creatively by your words. You completely lured me in as I continued to read. I fully enjoyed this little story and the line I love the most is:

What is your name? I'm sorry sir that is classified information! And also when George went around the desk and pulled a plug to which the robot fell over on the desk and the next word George says is: now give me that file! I love it!

You are full of talent and you know how to lure your readers in and you let me wanting more please tell me there is more! Keep sharing and most of all keep writing. A five-star for sure!

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