Good afternoon! I thought I might stop on in for a short little visit with you and as I did I came across this piece that you have written that you call "The Stranger" My first is impression: WOW! I was hooked from the start as you weave your web of words luring me further in as your story unfolds every so cleverly and most uniquely and creatively as you build the stream as you left wanting more yes I see in your description that this is unfinished and must know when it is complete for I must how the rest of the story goes and ends! I love it from the very start clear to the very end as you build my excitement with each and every line! Great job! Keep sharing and most of all keep writing. I will have to give this a 4 star but only because it is not finished so when you do lemme know I for sure will come to finish reading it and change the rating from a 4 star to a 5 star for sure!

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