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 Break Open in new Window. [E]
Poetry Topic of the Month entry May'22
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Good evening! I thought I would come by for just a short little visit and as I did I found your poem you call: "Break". I really enjoyed the poem that you have cleverly created as you spin your web of words as you drew me in and you also left me wanting more! You make a good point on what makes summer broken. I really enjoyed your whole poem and I would have to say that the very first line is what stood out to me the most. "You can't call a break something that is not broken." There is just something about that line. I like it!

I also like that you posted at the bottom of your page the prompt information. Good job. Keep sharing and most of all keep writing!

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