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My friend gave his 2 year old a drum set! Can you hear him play?
by Kåre เลียม Enga Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Good evening! I thought I would come in for a little short visit and as I did I found this cute little poem that you wrote for one of your friends. I love the title and the description as they both drew me in. I love the style of this poem and the way it rhymes in rhythm and I must admit it made you did make me chuckle a time or time. Yes, I can hear the little boy bang on his drum making a lot of noise and I can see his mom and dad with plugs in their ears as well as you have cleverly weaved your web of words painting a picture for me to clearly see. I also like that you put a little note at the bottom of your poem giving more information on your friend and now two boys.
Keep sharing and most of all keep writing.

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