Good morning! I thought I would come by for a little visit and I came across your Poetry folder and took a look inside and came upon your dark poems and so the title to this poem is what drew me in ~ "The Final Darkness." I really enjoyed the way you wrote this poem and you do have a way with words and really drew me in as you left me wanting more and I like that. I like the feel of this poem as you painted a picture for me to see and wonder at the same time. I did not see any errors in this poem. Keep sharing and most of all keep writing!



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