I got confused between the mention of spring in the tropics being all year long with flowers always in bloom and then the listing and description of flowers that I don't think of as being very tropical. It seems just a bit disjointed in this. Maybe the prompts blended together for this poem weren't quite as compatible as they could have been. I really wanted this poem to work for me. It isn't noticeably structurally flawed in my eyes. It looks like a sonnet to me I just... The subject doesn't mesh for me.