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*Sun*Greetings Blueyez. I am happy to celebrate You with a review on behalf of "Poetry Review Garden [on hiatus]" Open in new Window..


*Bee* I love snapdragons and this poem made me a bit sad for the bees! The contrast of the lovely flower with the idea of bees being swallowed is vivid. It can so appear like that as bees are strong enough to open that snap! Very evocative poem.

*Flowery* The form follows the prompt and it was pleasing to read aloud with its repeated s sounds. A straightforward action picture is created with simplicity. I think it stirs curiousity if you did not know about this relationship.

*Bee* I had fun dreaming in your vision, which brought a whole picture to mind from such simple words. Thanks for sharing.


Write on in your style!
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