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 The Twins Open in new Window. [13+]
entry dark dreamscape april 2022
by Pumpkin Spice Sox Author Icon
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Review by eyestar~* Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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*Sun*Greetings My Sox Rox. I am happy to celebrate You with a review on behalf of "Poetry Review Garden [on hiatus]" Open in new Window..


*Rabbit* Wow! You did a great job with the prompt picture. It stumped me so My muse gave up. LOL I like how you use simple language and use contrast of the dance of Easter with the sinister intent of the bunnies.

*Rabbit2* You painted a vivid picture of these two bunnies and you built up to the idea of homicide. Your rhymes were effective and the personification of axes that could take away funnies is awesome. That the bunnies see nothing "obscene" about their activities is dark. *Cool*

*Rabbit3* The poem has a pleasing flow to read aloud with effective rhyme and soundscape. The tone reminds me of the Lizzie Borden tale. *Shock* Good job.

Thanks for sharing your gift and for jumping into the contest. Creepy!


Write on in your style!
eyestar
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