Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating !

Your poem was featured in this weekend's WDC SuperPower Reviwer's May Review Raid and I loved it so thought you deserved a nice review.


INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:
You wrote a heartstring-pulling Mother's Day poem.

You kept me riveted throughout and made me read straight through to the end.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

This was a highly emotional poem and as someone who has also lost her beloved Mom, highly relatable to me. You have my deepest condolences on the loss of your Mother.

Your poem was beautifully written, evoked strong emotions in me, and was interesting to read.

Your poem is well written, flows nicely and, I think, is highly relatable to anyone who has lost their own mother.

My favorite line is this one: "To me they are divine love seeds." I love your idea of divine love seeds.

I liked how you structured your poem.

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your poem.

The genres you selected are perfect for your poem.

In the spirit of helpfulness, I'd recommend adding a thumbnail picture, but it's certainly not required. It might net you more readers though. Just my two cents.


CONCLUSION:
You wrote a beautiful holiday/memorial poem that I enjoyed reading. Well done!

Thank you for sharing your heart and poetry with the writing.com community!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler



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