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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I think the line "Get me every time" should be "Gets me every time". The poem is really sweet right up until the last line which I found a bit disturbing and threatening. I thought it was a lovely love but then you slap the reader with the threat that the love isn't perfect and unconditional.

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