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Given: Apr 28, 2022 at 11:45pm
Length: 326 Characters |
314 w/o WritingML
This poem is very stream of consciousness. I think you mean crazy not craxy, typo I get it. The jump from the not all people are craxy line to the next one is a bit sharp it totally changes direction from the first part of the poem, perhaps you could put in a slightly better transition. Otherwise nice poem.
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