I enjoy song parodies so it was fun to sing this one! I liked your old fashion spelling of "tygre" that reminded me of Blake's poem. I am not familiar with Jasper.in your tag line. Maybe adding a note at the end of the poem would be a helpful resource.
The theme is romantic with a hopeful mood. In singing it to the tune of "You are My sunshine" I only felt it off in two places. I wanted to add a syllable to "I'm kept safe"...eg as in "I am safe" and I wondered about another word or syllable after "it's true".
This was a delightful sing song and the orange colour font was effective too!
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Greetings Blue Moon. I am happy to celebrate You with a review on behalf of "Poetry Review Garden [on hiatus]" 
I enjoy song parodies so it was fun to sing this one! I liked your old fashion spelling of "tygre" that reminded me of Blake's poem. 
I am not familiar with Jasper.in your tag line. Maybe adding a note at the end of the poem would be a helpful resource. 
The theme is romantic with a hopeful mood. In singing it to the tune of "You are My sunshine" I only felt it off in two places. I wanted to add a syllable to "I'm kept safe"...eg as in "I am safe" and I wondered about another word or syllable after "it's true". 
This was a delightful sing song and the orange colour font was effective too!
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You responded to this review 04/06/2022 @ 12:09pm EDT