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*Sun*Greetings Solice.Bring. I am happy to celebrate You with a review on behalf of "Poetry Review Garden [on hiatus]" Open in new Window..


*Butterflyo* What an intriguing title that drew me in. The idea of a do over as a new year theme is brilliant. *Laugh* I enjoyed the light hearted tone and colour of the poem and its sentiments.

*Flowerr* The poem with its 4 line verses is fun to read. The flow and rhyme scheme added to the quick pace and positive philosophy. You created a party atmosphere that was a joy to embrace. The reader is drawn in and can use their own ideas, thoughts, events and goals that occur to them. I like when one can be involved in the vision. *Heart*

*Quill* Though the rhythm count was not even, it did not throw off the read, though I wanted to add an article before "Dial". It jerked the flow abit without it. *Wink* The two first lines say the same thing with a different notion. The "oh" through me a bit out of the flow.. but I see its use as adding to the high vibe of realization. Minor thoughts.

*Dragonflyg* YOur use of rhyme and instances of assonance and consonance added to the soundscape and flow effectively. I liked the rhyme "chablis". *Smile*

*Star* Thanks for sharing your creative and entertaining poem that starts the new year with style!

Write on in your style!
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