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 It Began with a Smirk Open in new Window. [E]
Rising to the Challenge Contest
by Anna Marie Carlson Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Sun*Greetings Anna Marie Carlson. I am happy to celebrate You with a review on behalf of "Poetry Review Garden [on hiatus]" Open in new Window..


*Flowerr*Oh I really liked this response to the prompt and using laughter as a topic for raising our vibrations. I could see how a smirk could be a beginning to what follows. Brilliant idea.

*Dragonflyb* The poem shares how smiles, and kindness are key to relating with others and the world.
It was cool to see the word "beatitudes" as a meaningful one to encompass your ideas.

*Quill* I felt that the word "where" might be changed to "then" ( like in a new sentence} as I did not follow how the word where would apply to what came before.

I noticed the rhyme scheme was inconsistent as the second verse has no rhyme and the verses were free style without a certain rhythm. *Wink*

*Butterflyo* I felt the second verse could be a tribute to a mentor or teacher who gave teaching with respect, or a role model. *Heart*

*Star*Thanks for sharing your vision and craft.
Write on in your style!
eyestar
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