Wheel of Fortune [18+] My blog--I pull a card--if it doesn't speak to me...perhaps it is for you? |
Greetings, ridinghhood-p.boutilier, I am reviewing this today as a judge for the "Writing 4 Kids Contest " . Yours in one of fourteen entries. First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest. Visually appealing Easy to understand Followed the prompt & rules First Impression: This brought back memories from a few years ago when I attended a Pow Wow near Munising, Michigan at the campgrounds I was camping at. A young woman in a jingle dress explained to me that her dress was a prayer dress for healing and her 365 cones represented each day of the year. Your poem is quite special. Thank you for entering it. Technicalities: None I'm aware of. Favorites: Every step is my prayer and also May this healing be strong. Final Thoughts: This is very different from the other entries I've read so far. Though the poem is short, it is very impressive. Best of luck in the contest! Have a great day and... K e e p on W r i t i n g ! Cubby ")
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