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Review #4646660
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Wheel of Fortune Open in new Window. [18+]
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by ridinghhood-p.boutilier Author Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Greetings, ridinghhood-p.boutilier, I am reviewing this today as a judge for the "Writing 4 Kids Contest Open in new Window.. Yours in one of fourteen entries.


*Pencil* First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

*Boxcheckb* Visually appealing
*Boxcheckb* Easy to understand
*Boxcheckb* Followed the prompt & rules

*Crayons4* First Impression: This brought back memories from a few years ago when I attended a Pow Wow near Munising, Michigan at the campgrounds I was camping at. A young woman in a jingle dress explained to me that her dress was a prayer dress for healing and her 365 cones represented each day of the year. Your poem is quite special. Thank you for entering it. *Smile*

*Crayons5* Technicalities: None I'm aware of.

*Crayons2* Favorites:

         Every step is my prayer

and also

         May this healing be strong.

*Crayons8* Final Thoughts: This is very different from the other entries I've read so far. Though the poem is short, it is very impressive.

Best of luck in the contest!


Have a great day and...*Quill*
  K e e p on W r i t i n g !
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