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Hello KingsSideCastle ,

I am reviewing this story/poem for the following contest:
"Rising to the Challenge! - CLOSED"   by Lilli 🧿 ☕

Prompt: Start your poem with this phrase: "It begins..."
Line Count: minimum 12 lines

This review has no bearing on the outcome of the contest. Reviewing the entries gives me the opportunity to take a closer look.

Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:

As an insomniac, I get to witness sunrise every morning and it is beautiful. Every morning I see the colors you mentioned streak across the sky, leaving me in awe.

As the first half of the poem describes my morning, the latter describes my husband's, lol.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:

No spelling or grammar issues were noted.
Great job with the prompt!

Closing Comments:

Thank you for your entry! Keep writing!



Thank you for sharing your work.


My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .