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Hello Anna Marie Carlson ,

I am reviewing this story/poem for the following contest:
"Rising to the Challenge! - CLOSED"   by Lilli

Prompt: Start your poem with this phrase: "It begins..."
Line Count: minimum 12 lines

This review has no bearing on the outcome of the contest. Reviewing the entries gives me the opportunity to take a closer look.

Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:

I really liked the opening line, it began with a smirk, which puts the reader in a certain mood - causing them to smirk, too!

This is a happy poem, a feel-good poem, and it made me smile. I love the cheerfulness of it and overall tone - positivity!

I think my favorite part of your poem is the first quatrain.


Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:

No errors were noted.

Closing Comments:

Thank you for your entry and keep writing!



Thank you for sharing your work.


My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .