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Hello Tileira ,

I am reviewing this story/poem for the following contest:
"Rising to the Challenge! - CLOSED"   by Lilli

Prompt: Start your poem with this phrase: "It begins..."
Line Count: minimum 12 lines

This review has no bearing on the outcome of the contest. Reviewing the entries gives me the opportunity to take a closer look.

Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:

It's been a real treat reading the entries and discovering where each poet takes the prompt. Your poem took me on a bit of a journey and the word selections created images in my mind that helped carry me through the journey.

It's too difficult for me to say which quatrain I like the most because has lines that I absolutely love.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:

I did not see any errors.

Closing Comments:

Thank you for your entry! This was a real treat and a joy to read.
Keep writing!



Thank you for sharing your work.


My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .