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 Raffeel (The Four Kingdoms) Open in new Window. [ASR]
Raffeel (The Four Kingdoms). Fantastical war and massacre (Ayvarith conlang in use).
by SeanFhear Author Icon
Review by sindbad Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hi
SeanFear

This is a nice and interesting outline of Raffeel the four kindom. This outline with the prime motivation and orientation of each kindom on each segment did give reader some majestic and highlander taste to the readers. I liked the basic structure of the commentary and learnt how to present historical and mythological aspect in a free-flowing manner. Great job indeed.. sindbad

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