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Lesson Week 2: Prompt, New Horizons
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Review by sindbad Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi
Starling

This is a nice and interesting story with so well orchestred course here. The begining with a cruise or yacht and the way Anne got hurt and the way the whole story unfolded did leave a deep impact. The way Peter kept the situation under a semblance of control and all sudden events unfolding has been well handled by you. Overall a great and evolving story.. sindbad

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