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Review #4629086
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 The Toaster Incident Open in new Window. [E]
Flash Fiction
by Jacky Author Icon
Review by sindbad Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi
Jacky

This is a nice and creative on the toaster. The way you changed the actual content to a humorous and rather interesting presentation to the readers. The way Dan had to take a decision though he felt all is going his way. The way he agreed to the garden path and accepted the consequences. Great job..sindbad

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