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Hi
Odessa Molinari

This is a nice and creepy story you have written. As a reader l did get the creepy feeling, the way you created the scenes and sorroundings. The way you progressed with Barry and the way the story end did enhance the scary component to level 5. Hence will be my rating. Great job indeed..sindbad

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