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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi
J. B. Anthony

This is s nice and interesting story with a catchy title, specially potrait of a man is a positive identification about achievement, rare indeed is to be consumed by fear. You have done a commendable job and created a persona that was worth admiring. Overall a nice and interesting ending with last option as a desire to sleep..sindbad

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