Wow! A different perspective and a very powerful poem.
The title, brief description and genres work. Maybe you'd like to add a cover photo.
The verse structure and words chosen evoke an image and a powerful emotion. You may want to consider putting it in italics, centering it and changing the font. I actually counted the words – there are twenty-five. How much you've churned up in just twenty-five words! The sense of loss is from both sides, not just one. That's quite an intriguing insight.
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