What a great rhythm you've got to your words!
The layout and rhyme scheme work perfectly to echo what you're trying to evoke in each verse. I'd suggest maybe a change of font (verdana?) and a slightly bigger type size.
You tell the story through the seasons in a few very well chosen images and emotions. Since you've got 'circling' in the title, one can imagine it starting over. The title works well. I think you have a few more characters on the brief description and could expand on that.
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