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In My Tiny Room  [E]
My rooms, real or imagined.
by Joy-the Harpy Witch
Review of In My Tiny Room  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I like the title — and I LOVE the brief description! The cover picture is adorable s and genres work, too.

The poem is superb. Lovely imagery and insightful metaphors. The 'enclosure' within walls and within words is a delightful thought. The image of clipped wings growing and flying is really profound. And 'bargained rapture' had me going 'aha, that's what it is, truly!' The last verse made me smile-aloud! *Bigsmile*

My only suggestion would be for WritingML like font, linespace and center.

Thanks for this absolutely wonderful poem!
Write On!


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