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I love what you did with the prompt word! Brilliant!

At the beginning, the poem seems to be just about snow.
It then goes on to wish that snow was plausible in the summer. In just a few syllables, you've created a very thought provoking piece. Snow would be the ideal thing to have in the summer heat, but snow is just what we can't have at that time. This is a dilemma that is present in so many aspects of life and so many situations, isn't it? Great job!

PS - Are you sure you've got that word-count right?

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