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Review #4617067
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Fun In The Sun Raffle  [E]
A raffle to celebrate the beginning of summer.
by amy-The Putrid Blood Sucker
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hallo!
I visited this forum because I was gifted some tickets.

I love the title of the raffle. The banner and trinket look good. The guidelines / rules are clear and concise.

Suggestions:
1. You've written 'Now Now Open' - did you deliberately repeat the word 'now'?
2. I think the forum would look more exciting with more WritingML, like font, size and color.
3. You may want to put in more sub-headings. You already have 'Rules'. Maybe 'Prizes' and 'Thanks' could be others.
4. I think GPs in the plural doesn't need an apostrophe. *Delight*

Thanks for running this!

Raffle On!
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