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 Deeply Loved, Dearly Missed  [13+]
A "Describe a Woman" contest entry (250 words or less without using she, her, etc)
by Thumbsucker
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I visited your portfolio because your WdC Anniversary falls on June 30.

I think you've done a great job within the constraints of the contest. You've evoked images and feelings, and the determination of the character leaves an impact. Great job! *Thumbsupl*

Suggestion:
1. WritingML like line-spacing, font and size for readability.
2. Genres - this is a 'contest entry' and I'd suggest 'Romance/Love' and 'Relationship' as genres.

This was written many years ago, but I'm glad I got to read it now.

Write On!

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