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 Five cats  [ASR]
A chain of American Cinquains for 5 pet cats.
by ผีKåreEngaในMontana
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How did you know that I was going to ask if there were two Frenchys? *Cat* *Cat2* *Ha*

Those felines sure have their own personalities, don't they? You've brought out all five different characters in these few well chosen meows. *PawPrints* The build up to the last one, and then the emotional impact of that, is beautiful.

Thank you for the note on the poetic form, and on the two Frenchys. But you know, I'm curious. Why repeat that name? This reader wants to know.

Suggestion? Um. Well, I can actually see this being centralised and made into a 'shape' poem to resemble a cat. If you'd like to try that.

An aside - Have you read 'Jennie', 'Thomasina' and 'The Silent Miao' by Paul Gallico? He had 23 cats and the mews were often his muse.

Meow On!

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