I visited your portfolio because it's your WdC Anniversary.
I'm so glad I clicked on this item!
What a lovely take on the subject. I was smiling throughout, I could relate to every word! I'm not going to give away what you've done with the topic, because I want people reading this review to click and read the poem and get as pleasantly surprised as I was.
Suggestions:
1. Include a cover photo
2. Use some WritingML like font, size, center and maybe color
3. Check for grammar - when you shorten 'you are' it should be written as 'you're' with the apostrophe.
4. 'Masterpiece' might look better as one word.
5. You've classified this as poetry, which is great - but I think 'lyrics' would also fit, I was imagining singing it!
Happy WdC Anniersary. Thanks for this delightful poem
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