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That ending! *Taco* (sorry, there is no burger emoticon).

Your poem is reading my mind. I get that Haiku is a very specific artform, but I have no clue how to do it. And I also think your assessment that it kind makes no sense to have Haiku in English. Although, even in English it is possible to limit syllables.

As for sushi. It depends on where you go. And how many sushis you eat. I can get full. If there are many, MANY sushis.

Very fun to read piece!

Annette
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