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Do they change color?  [E]
On Pink Fluffy Unicorns
by WakeUpAndLive️🦇Elf'sSpell
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hallo!
I came to your portfolio because you have a WdC anniversary this month.

Well, the title, brief description and cover picture meant I just had to pick this item to review! To answer your question: they're golden when they're born, and then they change to pink. Once they reach the pink stage, they don't change again. *Smile*

Love the poem. It is a call to go back to innocence, belief and small joys. And I appreciate how, in a few simple lines, you bring out the need to search both externally - the clouds' and internally - your soul and memories. This could be a metaphor for so many things. The search for happiness, for example.

The poem is thought provoking and feel-good, and works at many levels. Thank you for sharing it!
Write On!


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